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As the sun passes a million brighter stars, there seems to be no illumination, for space is all black, but when the curtain is pulled back, we can see as if we produce a similar articulation. And as galaxies collide, and gloriously divide, into life more vibrant than ever, to see a nebulae derived from the very death of those bodies.  

But then back on a small planet, the most ridiculous enchantment, this third rock that travels so precarious in its position. With what seems like little transition, but always on the brink of extinction, although never any closer then the day before.

The endless hopes of irresistible dreams, often holding us till we scream, till we breath the air of reasoning, wisdom, truth to find the greater meaning which is offered up as proof. Cause no matter the tools you trade with, or how you chew the fat, the space around you remains black, until the curtain is pulled back.

We search the world for meaning, for universal truth, but we forget to look in front of us, its underneath our boot. The ant that moves your dirt around, the cockroach that shares your food, you shouldn't search for meaning when God treats you like a stool.

A black hole will take the light and never give it back, and this is the same as when murderers attack, for they steal a life and never give it back all things are found in nature, just check your docket stack. But then people are as bright and warm as the sun, and some have the gravitational pull of the largest planets, giving us balance.

The sun was the start and is the end of our glorious existence, which we will never see in our blink of a pittance of life. But the spirit, the soul, that will journey on to systems more bright, we see there is no curtain in sight and we are on an endless flight, where we rise above our spirit.

To a harmonious place with love as the only exchange rate, and hate is left for obvious reasons, but often annoyed, that people have so little joy, in merely gazing up into the ever after. And while ipads are fun, and google sky map has it by the ton, your eyes...are the best judge of amazing.

Look up!!
I hope you enjoy! Thank you for reading! =D
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TristanCody Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Student Writer
One thing: inner-rhyming.

Very nice work - I like it very much.

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MentallyBoundRonin Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I appreciate that very much sir. =)
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TristanCody Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Student Writer
You're most welcome!
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WhatIsBeauty1 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I read this like at least six times. I absolutely love this!
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MentallyBoundRonin Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! ummmm, ya,

I did not expect that! hehe.
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WhatIsBeauty1 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Anytime darling. (:
It really is amazing.
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MentallyBoundRonin Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
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WhatIsBeauty1 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
(:
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